Little scenes
Feb. 19th, 2005 08:32 amI set myself the job this morning of filling in some of the holes in the text. I described a few incidental characters, and realized that I hadn't done a good job of describing Salvatore, so I did that, too. I also added in a scene where one of the cabin boys (a chipmunk named Ally - when this one gets hurt later on, his replacement is another chipmunk named Theo. I don't think we ever get a Simon, though) explains some aspects of ship life to Annarisse. I finally gave the second mate a name, and as I go through the book, I'm going to have to add in some descriptions involving him, the carpenter, the sailmaker, and some of the mice gunners. (There are thirty-two of them, so I didn't bother to name them all. During the battle of Rocksbarren, there will be bloody mice parts raining down on the ship from the cannon fodder manning our guns.)
Basically, I have the body of the book done except for a few scenes. This is just fleshing it out. With the next book, I'll do more of this stuff before I start, for continuity's sake. The only big problem with doing it this way is that eighty thousand words is unweildy. I scrolled through sixty-five pages of stuff last night to find a scene I'd skipped. Also, I've now got a situation where the main doc is going to differ significantly from the component-parts docs I had before.
I'm going to go work out, get my hair cut and my eyebrows waxed, and give Piet some time to relax, maybe not in that order. Ah, Saturday.
Basically, I have the body of the book done except for a few scenes. This is just fleshing it out. With the next book, I'll do more of this stuff before I start, for continuity's sake. The only big problem with doing it this way is that eighty thousand words is unweildy. I scrolled through sixty-five pages of stuff last night to find a scene I'd skipped. Also, I've now got a situation where the main doc is going to differ significantly from the component-parts docs I had before.
I'm going to go work out, get my hair cut and my eyebrows waxed, and give Piet some time to relax, maybe not in that order. Ah, Saturday.