I like the sound of the Evangelical version, honestly, though I can picture a lot of people doing it wrong - sort of glancing at their friends every so often as if to say "Hey, do you get it yet?" rather than letting the actions speak for themselves. But I like yours the best - I was thinking about it when some of my college friends expressed sorrow that I was not to be converted. I said to myself, if God requires that I say such-and-such to get into heaven, and doesn't care that I've been a good person...more importantly, if God will turn away truly good people who are not Christian, like, say, Ghandi...then I don't want to be in His heaven, and my Christian friends will just have to live the afterlife without me. :)